TheSharkBite's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[SP7 - All of Me Rmx John Legend]

I'd like more variation in sound, but that's just me. Glad you're still posting!!

VorticityMusic responds:

Thanks! As you can see, I've started afresh on my account. Anyway, will try to finish a trance song asap to upload! Thanks for reviewing!

[Again - Dance loop]

GREAT! Love the chord progressions, next time just upload it as a loop

Doublechindoge7 responds:

oops...

[Vertigo]

Watch it when your notes clash with your chords; It could produce a beautiful sound, or, unfortunately, in this case, an out-of-place tone. It kind of ruined the song for me...

Squeegee4554 responds:

Ok. I'll try that then...

[Zyzyx - Extra Life]

I feel like the percussion didn't fit with the instruments, and the speed was a little slow for a chip-style song. It did, however, follow in the 'Rat's steps. Also, the bit at 1:21 felt like a mess. I couldn't really follow anything.

DJ-Zyzyx responds:

I agree, the part at 1:21 is a bit hard to follow and Could have used some sort of top melody. I did, however, make this in about 3 hours xD So yeah. Thanks for the review dude :D

[Atomic]

A little slow for my taste, otherwise nice.

MysteriousPresence responds:

Thanks for the review, and glad you liked it ! ;)

[Zyzyx - Temineyes]

I really like this one! We really should do that collab sometime... Been so long! :P
I really look foreward to working with you!

And if you ever want this stuff on spotify, just send me a message!

P.S. I would call this Happy Hardcore, but thats not an option on Newgrounds...

P.P.S. The key change at 2:38 gave you a bonus star...

DJ-Zyzyx responds:

Thank you dude :3

[Zyzyx - Last Light (9/11 Remembrance)]

I get the idea on syncopation, but it takes away from the song because it sounds a bit out of place, ya know what I mean?

DJ-Zyzyx responds:

No.... what do yu mean?

[Time & Space (ft. looperman)]

Well done! - one star for the beginning, but good job!

Squeegee4554 responds:

Yeah - that is really annoying for me, too. For some reason, when I exported it out of Garageband and posted it here it suddenly became really quiet!!

[Zophar - Mystery Map]

There a few notes off... but this is why I'm scouting you:

A: You have ambition. You are already making an album, and that's exactly what I did first. I think that improving music quality is very important, but this is a good start.
B: You have improved so much. That is a sign. I'm sure if you keep a good pace then you'll have great work in no time!
C: You've got the skills. I can tell you have a nice foundation of music theory and know what to do when you write a piece.

That's all. Shark Out.

FelixZophar responds:

Thanks SharkBite. I know I have a few notes off. But I first wrote this on the piano. I used a chord book to help me. Then I wrote the middle part on bass guitar. Then I went into my electronic music studio and turned it into an electronic music song.

[Undertale - Megalovania (Iori Licea Cover)]

Now I've seen many remixes... I'm sorry but this was really not very creative when it comes to remixes...

iorilicea responds:

It's only a begin! Don't worry.