Hmmmmm... I think you've had your practice. Making Tobu songs is just an excuse for not trying your own style out. The reason I don't like to follow other people's styles is... Everyone's heard it before! Take a risk. Evolve was a good example of something very original.
As for the actual song...
It was not very unique. The melody was not strong enough... I got a little lost with progression... On the other hand, mastering was pretty solid. Also... In case you are interested... You could be selling! MOST of your songs are solid enough and are of good enough- nay- are better than enough to be sold. Try the "Freemium" tactic. (I can explain if you want). If you continue on your own style you could learn something from selling... Not to mention the extra buck! (But the money isn't important).