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Vocals aren't loud enough, otherwise this is nice, m8.

I get the idea on syncopation, but it takes away from the song because it sounds a bit out of place, ya know what I mean?

DJ-Zyzyx responds:

No.... what do yu mean?

I too get clipping errors throughout the song. Turn down the master track when you share your music... But you should ask your teacher to work on mastering... Also the bass drop was kind of uncalled for.

Well done! - one star for the beginning, but good job!

Squeegee4554 responds:

Yeah - that is really annoying for me, too. For some reason, when I exported it out of Garageband and posted it here it suddenly became really quiet!!

There a few notes off... but this is why I'm scouting you:

A: You have ambition. You are already making an album, and that's exactly what I did first. I think that improving music quality is very important, but this is a good start.
B: You have improved so much. That is a sign. I'm sure if you keep a good pace then you'll have great work in no time!
C: You've got the skills. I can tell you have a nice foundation of music theory and know what to do when you write a piece.

That's all. Shark Out.

FelixZophar responds:

Thanks SharkBite. I know I have a few notes off. But I first wrote this on the piano. I used a chord book to help me. Then I wrote the middle part on bass guitar. Then I went into my electronic music studio and turned it into an electronic music song.

This is slightly better, again just MIDI on different instruments. And that is not what a remix should be.

Now I've seen many remixes... I'm sorry but this was really not very creative when it comes to remixes...

iorilicea responds:

It's only a begin! Don't worry.

'Mafaraid nothing in the known universe can top Our #1 Rat, but... You've come as close as it gets mate.

DJ-Zyzyx responds:

Thanks Sharkbite <3

Just because its not copyrighted does NOT mean you can post this.

Could you please respond to this, etzer? Did I just hear the GD sound effect for ending a level? IN the song? Or am I super crazy? At 1:47??????

EtzerGD responds:

yea u did :)

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